My creative writing piece: “Ara Smith”

<p>Hi everyone&excl; I&&num;8217&semi;m Delma&comma; I&&num;8217&semi;m 22 and I&&num;8217&semi;m Peruvian&period; One of my hobbies is creative writing&period; I usually write for myself&comma; but I&&num;8217&semi;d like to share a piece of my writing with all of you&period; I&&num;8217&semi;d love to know what you think this story is about&comma; or what is happening in this particular scene&period; Enjoy&excl;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p style&equals;"text-align&colon; center"><u>Ara Smith<&sol;u><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>The classroom door opened&period; It was the principal’s secretary&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>– Ara Smith&comma; the principal wants to see you – she said before leaving quickly&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Ara stood up and&comma; without asking for anyone’s permission&comma; headed towards the door&comma; followed by mutters&comma; laughs and even an ironic &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;Good luck&comma; freak”&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>She walked past the teacher’s desk&comma; ignoring her completely&comma; gave the classroom one last look and slammed the door behind her&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Silence reigned&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p style&equals;"text-align&colon; center">~&cir;~<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Ara walked through the corridors until she reached the door of the principal’s office&period; As everything in that place&comma; it was big&comma; pretentious and lifeless&period; The secretary was already there&comma; waiting for her&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>– Button your jacket and tie up your hair&comma; Miss Smith – she said tonelessly&comma; while staring blankly at the closed door&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Ara slowly fastened her buttons&comma; took a hair tie out of her shirt’s pocket and put her long&comma; dark hair up&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>The secretary knocked on the door&comma; opened it and entered the office followed by Ara&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>– Ara Smith&comma; sir – she announced&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>– You can leave now – said the principal coldly&period;&nbsp&semi;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>The secretary bowed slightly and left&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>– Take a seat – he ordered&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Ara obeyed&period;&nbsp&semi;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>After a moment of silence&comma; the principal spoke&colon;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>– &nbsp&semi;Miss Smith&comma; I’ve requested your presence to let you know that&comma; in ten years&comma; your progress in our institution has been from minimal to none&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Ara remained quiet&period; The principal grabbed some papers that were spread all over his desk&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>– In fact&comma; and if proof is needed&comma; here I have the reports that your teachers have written for me throughout those years – he said while going through the pages – &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;Ara Smith” – he read – &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;is unable to memorise simple concepts and follow basic orders”&period; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;Miss Smith seems to be unable to comprehend what she reads&comma; which is concerning as she is sixteen years old&period; It is also unjustifiable because&comma; unlike the rest of the students&comma; she arrived to the school being able to read fluently”&period; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;Apparently&comma; Ara does not voluntarily interact with any of her classmates&comma; which makes team work difficult”&period; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;Miss Smith never participates in class&comma; and she usually spends her time immersed in some absurd book”&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>The principal left the papers on his desk and looked at Ara as if he was very pleased with himself&period;&nbsp&semi;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>– What should we do about this&quest; Hm&quest;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Ara didn’t speak&period; She merely looked into his eyes defiantly and with deep disdain&period;&nbsp&semi;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>After a few seconds&comma; the principal started feeling uncomfortable&period; He looked away&comma; sighed impatiently and started gathering the papers together&period;&nbsp&semi;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>– Miss Smith&comma; I’ve spoken to your parents&comma; and we’ve come to the conclusion that your immediate transfer to a new school would be the best choice – he said&period; – To a school for students with… &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;special abilities”&comma; so to speak&period; And by this&comma; I mean that they are most likely similar to you&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Suddenly&comma; two men dressed in the exact same clothing ­– a white shirt&comma; black trousers and a long beige coat – entered the office&period; They both stood behind Ara&period;&nbsp&semi;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>– These gentlemen will escort you to your new school – the principal said&period; – Do not bother packing&period; It has already been done for you&comma; and you will find your luggage at the entrance hall – with a hand gesture&comma; the principal indicated that they could leave&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>&lbrack;zombify&lowbar;post&rsqb;<&sol;p>&NewLine;